Monday, December 3, 2012
Original Rap #1 F***in Problem
if you aint got a message its a fuckin problem
and if the lyrics wack i got a fuckin problem
if you aint got a message its a fuckin problem
and if the lyrics wack i got a fuckin problem
if you aint got a message its a fuckin problem
and if the lyrics wack i got a fuckin problem
im trying hard to avoid these fuckin problems
getting rid of the garbage maybe i should absolve them
you aint nothing if you aint got a message
in a time where we progress rap became regressive
we take steps and encounter these strange questions
like the morals we were raised on we're inclined to just forget them
never that my memory's too good
simple-minded rappers i guess they misunderstood
lyrics that they speak are embracing another evil
giant misfits theyre dismissing all reason
im heated they seem to be products of inbreeding
always thanking god but they might as well be heathens
leave a bad example for those who will proceed them
making light of all the things that people should believe in
stop. then rap will probably be better
tell who signs these rappers that they made a huge mistake from
what i observe these words seem to be worthless
and the minds of those who listen merely need a new escape
kelv
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ReplyDeleteKelvin! You are one of my favorite students but you have a lot of work to do.
ReplyDeleteEach missing chapter is -4. You could lose 20 points.
Each missing imitation/creation is -2.5. You are missing 7.